Dark Poetry #4 |
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CobyFeelsMyPain New Member
since 2003-10-12
Posts 6 |
summer shall i compare thee to a summer's day? you make me burn and get all hot and sweat like a pig you remind me of the burning feel of concrete and bare feet nasty sticky melting ice cream dripping all over my fingers little children laughing and running and bumping into me the disgusting salt taste of the sea you remind me of irritating tourists with fat flabby legs men's bare chest with the outline of their t-shirt scorched into their flesh you remind me of the dry thirst that lingers at the back of my throat while all the nearby stalls sell coke for £1.50 and of the shape of my sandals burnt into my feet while flies and wasps ruin my picnic lastly you remind me of the sickly farting sound of a bottle of sun lotion as it leaks out like excrement, i hate summer and i hate you. -------------------------------------------------- |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
Haha... this is amazing. Shakespeare would roll in his grave. I know exactly what you mean, summer is disgusting, I love how you twisted it around into an insult. On second thought, maybe Shakespeare would like this... he was pretty keen on insults. I could picture you walking around on a strand, sneering at everything, about where you mentioned children bumping into you was when I got the actual image in my head... nice work there. Just don't show this to whoever it's about. Parasite Faith is a fine invention |
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CobyFeelsMyPain New Member
since 2003-10-12
Posts 6 |
Thank you very much. |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
very intresting, yes very intresting indeed "For those who understand you, no explanation is necessary. For those who don't, none is possible." |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
lol...if you hated all of the seasons, i wonder what this insult would be like. maybe you should move to Montana and learn to appreciate Summer more after a *slightly chilly* Winter this was not as poetic as it was amusing to me, but good job either way =). Love hurts as bad as it feels good. |
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