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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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Two palms spread tilling soil, pulled back, a quick snap from a burn left - by grains of silt and pebble. the grit of life. Oh, the last seedling of Spring rears its' sleepy head, steadfast and strong daring the sun to embrace it. Just this once . . . Yet, this small voice is stifled among a garden, flourishing with hydrangea, coneflower and sweet basil . . . Beneath the rock, tilted just so it hides, keeping company with the first frond of forest fern, waiting for its day to explode. [This message has been edited by littlewing (05-18-2004 12:58 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
you've come home... as soft and evergreen as the most delicate fern...  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
So good to read you once again.. Welcome Home!  ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Ringo 
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Can my eyes be decieving me????? Is this actually a NEW littlewing original gracing the blue pages???? *rubbing my eyes* Nope... it's still there... And just as great as I remember the others being. Whenever I feel blue, I start breathing again... http://www.cmlb.net/ringo [This message has been edited by Ringo (05-19-2004 07:41 PM).] |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
ohhh... wow. I really like this one! It was beautiful writing... you are very talented! I must admit. I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
That is beautiful. I think I'm going to get started again. GIS No turning back, this time, no walking away -Kutless |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
Hey Sue, Loved this!!! I havent been here in a while but i am glad to come back and see something so beautiful by one of my favorite poets here.  "So what befalls the flawless? |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Waiting for the sun... This is a beauty Susie |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Hi littlewing, what a nice surprise to read you here. Your poetry is so meaningful, and just as stunning as ever. My best to you good poetess~ |
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Endlessecho Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 398I live within myself |
This was beautiful. I know these times. |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
*jumpsupanddown*...littlewing!yay!ilikethisalot sisterweallmissedyouwelcomebackevenifit'snotfor longok?ttylnowcomereadmine,lol-River Running out of pain |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
butiful, amazing and true. keep them coming aye! hope to see ur poems round here again soon. darkness nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Sue, I have been thinking of you, wishing you would come back. And here you are and with a very captivating piece, which is no surprise, but a great pleasure as always. Much love, Margherita  |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Sue As usual your words mean so very much. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
it's good to see you back. i would tell you i enjoyed, but then you already knew that... |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Lovely aliteration Sue..and your metaphor is interesting...is it you? Goldenrose. The supreme happiness in life is the conviction that we are loved. Victor Hugo. |
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