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qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

0 posted 2004-05-11 09:41 PM

ALL I NEED IS YOU!!

I want you love.
I yearn for your touch.
I'm empty inside.
I miss you so much.
I'm sick, I'm hurt.
I'm evil, I'm mean.
I'm crazed, I'm hungry.
I'm desperate, I fien.
Everything I love,
from the sun to the moon,
is always torn from my grasp,
taken a moment too soon.
Before I have a chance,
to see, to appreciate.
It's gone in a flash.
I'm two seconds too late.
I know now in hindsight,
I let my soul slip away.
Should of fought more, showed more love,
then maybe you'd stay.
Could of opened up more,
shown the twinkle in my eye.
Given more passion,
& how you brighten my sky.
No one can ever compare.
It sounds redundant, but true.
You're all I ever wanted.
All I need is YOU!!

ELMO

"Dream as if you'll live forever. Live as if you'll die today!!"

[This message has been edited by qtpieelmo (05-12-2004 11:15 AM).]

sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

1 posted 2004-05-12 12:58 PM

wow terrific amazing ,kkeep it uppp..and ur poem do not suck sis ....ur poems are sooo cute..lolol..keep it uppp love and respect

peace

I will do anything ,not to hurt you, who ever hurts you ,is my enemy until i die...

I DONT AGREE WITH LOVE ever in my life.But dont ask me why..

Destinys_Fallen_Angel
Member

since 2004-05-06

Posts 75
Boise Idaho

2 posted 2004-05-12 04:21 AM

a wonderful poem that so depicts what i feel oh so often in life
Great job you are a gifted poet

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LucidityNow
Member

since 2001-02-06

Posts 118
Canada

3 posted 2004-05-12 07:42 AM

Your last few writes have opened us all up to the sense of loss you feel. This was a wonderful poem, I hope you can work things out in the end.

and i'm certain that if i drive into those trees, it would make less of a mess, than she's made of me...

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

4 posted 2004-05-12 11:09 AM

Thanx to all of you that replied--This is an older poem I have written about an Ex--I haven't had much time to write--I've graduated college recently--Just trying to get back in the groove of things!! Thanx again!! Love ya all!!

ELMO

"Dream as if you'll live forever. Live as if you'll die today!!"

sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

5 posted 2004-05-14 09:35 PM

huh??? ur are already out of college ,,u look like ur 16 or 17 omg.....well take care hahaha..

love and respect

I will cover you with my blood,not only because i love you but because your are the one that made my blood red...

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

6 posted 2004-05-15 12:08 PM

LoL--Yea I get that all the time--I'll be 23 in Aug. I grad. college last Dec.--Actually my grad ceremony is tomorrow--Whoo Hoo!!!

Thanx again for the reply!!

ELMO

"Dream as if you'll live forever. Live as if you'll die today!!"

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