Dark Poetry #4 |
Fallen |
*Inque Monroe* Junior Member
since 2003-10-18
Posts 43No where special |
(This is new, please reply!!!) I’m your fallen angel from above,, You’re my love from beyond, Any thoughts of loneliness have become so far gone, The moment you held me in your arms Your beautiful eyes and your soft touch makes me Feel like I’m at home For so long I hid in the shadows For fear of being used Then you come and embraced away my fears, I’m your fallen angel from above You’re my love from beyond And with your love and your trust I feel I can do anything They always told me I was worthless A piece of scum that could never be good But you, You changed that, You showed them my worth I’m your angel And you’re my love And together, We’ll show the world…the true meaning of love What does it matter, we will all die in the end anyway. |
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Soul Sepulchre Junior Member
since 2003-10-19
Posts 29Tennessee, USA |
YAYYYYYYYY!!! Yet another ingenius poem from my baby. Keep up the good work honey - you just keep on rolling out amazing poem after amazing poem. :-D, I will never ever stop reading or liking them. I love you honey, remember that. Yours truly, Jeremy. |
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Destinys_Fallen_Angel Member
since 2004-05-06
Posts 75Boise Idaho |
This is a wonderful poem, i truly enjoyed it, great job Yahoo messenger: destinys_Falen_Angel |
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sweet_cute_palestinian04 Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 418Earth |
omg this is great sweet ..and awesome..keep it upp... lovezz peace sis |
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Paper Tiger Member
since 2003-09-28
Posts 77 |
This piece seemed a little over-the-top to me (just being honest). Nevertheless, a very nice read indeed. We see much, observe little, and perceive less. |
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*Inque Monroe* Junior Member
since 2003-10-18
Posts 43No where special |
what do you mean over the top |
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