When the Daemons Were Crazy

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Dark Poetry #4

When the Daemons Were Crazy

alibaster
Member

since 2001-07-07

Posts 299
In my own private hell...(PA).

0 posted 2004-05-03 03:10 PM

Existance is a profanic joke
created when the daemons were crazy
and spewed up malevolence,
lust, and humiliations smoke.
The four Horsemen turned up soot
and hatered while swirling about their feet
were the volitile fires mixed with times sand.
They spread the seething powder
over the sleeping land.
Satan smiled with loving insanity
as he bled forth the bowels of
hell and trepidations profanity
creating existances' sweet foe -
Death -
feared for the waiting, murderous hands
that fill every existance with tender, sweet,
black breath.
(Rock us gently upon the hands of Death)

"There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul."(C)alibaster

"If it doesn't bite, scratch, and make you bleed it isn't worth it" (C) alibas

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

1 posted 2004-05-06 05:29 PM

wow... Dark. Very.. dark. I lloved it,

~lol~ I could feel ya. I think.~Lol~ The imagery in this was awesome. Very amazing.

I'll be looking for more.

Kissa_Bear

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

Paper Tiger
Member

since 2003-09-28

Posts 77

2 posted 2004-05-09 11:10 PM

Definitely a unique piece here. It reminds of 19th century poetry; the language and mood-set in this poem are old school indeed.

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

3 posted 2004-05-10 01:28 AM

this sounds like a folk song to satan. And I have to say things are feeling a bit warm around this one.

GIS

No turning back, this time, no walking away -Kutless

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

4 posted 2004-05-10 01:30 AM

nice wite..let me see if i can top yours. :-)

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