life, love, happiness, freedom

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Dark Poetry #4

life, love, happiness, freedom

aussie teen
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 396
Australia

0 posted 2004-04-30 09:16 AM

how can we
abuse these four
basic human rights
when there are people
who dont know what
freedom feels like

happiness is a dream
another world
an emotion non-existant

love consists of
forced marriges
and veilled faces

lives are stolen
before their time
has come about
war ripping apart
families, homes
lives, jobs, people

instead of life they endure death
instead of love they endure hate
instead of happiness they live in sadness
instead of freedom they are inprisoned

how can we continue
abusing the rights we
all seem to take advantage of,
and take for granted????

i dont know if this sounds finished..... please give me some feedback on what i have written .
Mel

so this is me but what do you care about that????
i am who i am. no one can change that but me, even then it will be a fight to the death

sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

1 posted 2004-04-30 06:39 PM

wow....i loved it keep it up and please finish it lolol..i want to hear more ...peace ..

aussie teen
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 396
Australia

2 posted 2004-05-14 02:52 AM

ive been trying to think of how it should finish...
but nothing is coming to me...
ne ways thankyou for the replies
Mel

so this is me but what do you care about that????
i am who i am. no one can change that but me, even then it will be a fight to the death

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