Dark Poetry #4 |
I am back... |
Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
I have slept, While the maggots crept, Upon on my mind, The evil kind, I return now, You wondered how With a dish served cold, Watching my rage unfold, Through the streets of hell, I ran ringing the bell, Of sanity and of justice, Not within my reach, Lost was I, you thought, With courage I fought, Picked myself throughout time, No wonder I commit such crimes, Now that I am back, No trait I will lack, Making you see that I am one, Humanity’s end has now begun. |
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loner187 Member
since 2004-03-21
Posts 106Upstate New York |
You have a real unique piece of writing here. It's one that sort-a makes you think and wonder. Nice, I still don't completly get it...yet again I rarely get anything completly. What if the hokey pokey is what it's all about? |
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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
this is amazing.... it leaves you guessing about what exactly you are saying yet giving you images that will ispire so many different endings.... and i say again. amazing... keep up the writing.. Mel so this is me but what do you care about that???? |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
Wow... it really makes you think... I love it. Amazing write. I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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