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A Reminder
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A Reminder |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
*note: nothing to do with suicide or self-mutilation* all i need is a reminder something to tell me i dont have to inflict such pain on myself to feel the hurt i feel on the inside on the outside. all i need is a message something to remind me that i dont need to run to escpae myself all i need is a breathe of air to tell myself its not worth it to tell myself there is something worth fighting for something worth struggling for something like you *Im sure alot of people can realte to this, like myself. This is just feelings and nothing more, nothing less. Id like to know some thoughts on this poem and anything to improve it, I really want to work this one.* nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world. |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
hey this is nice, i like =) - River sleep my precious slumber |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
 .........This is great Wow, 205 posts!, anyway this is a really good poem i liked the ending lovie. Very much. "Something like you...." (having a gud holiday lol?) Ciao, Hollow "Why are my visions so unliving with dreams? And why do I no longer care?" - Stygian |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
I nkow how you feel. I do... i really do. I wish that i didnt, but i do. I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
dw , really good write here girly it draws the reader in well  even for a rereading or two i did notice one word that you might have misspelled ( escape ) no biggie babe still impressed though -wolf |
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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
i know how you feel..... i know how hard it is to write something about what is going on inside of you... letting people into your head.... that is something im still compltely petrified of...... nice write and keep up the writing... Mel so this is me but what do you care about that???? |
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