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silhouetted
Senior Member

since 2004-01-30

Posts 537
New Zealand

0 posted 2004-04-09 01:21 AM

Immortality
Keeps me here
Keeps me bound
To a life once known before

Immortality
Keeps me waiting
Keeps me hoping
You'll walk round the corner

Immortality
Keeps me alive
Keeps me awake
While i try to lie my body down

Immortality
Keeps me wanting
Keeps me remembering
All those times i could've said something

Immortality
Keeps me locked up
Keeps me silent
As i scream from the inside

Immortality
Keeps me invisable
Keeps me from being seen
From being noticed

Immortality
Keeps my faith
Keeps my soul
Away from the world never to be released

Immortality keeps me from you.

The pain of losing you, is still wanting you near.

But your still gone...and I'm still here

darkness_witch
Senior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
Underneath

1 posted 2004-04-10 08:15 AM

i post this from an internet cafe in Hong Kong.

wow.

i love it.

the best ive seen from you.
a lot like wat i feel constantly.

keep it up lor.

ill send u a postcard i promise! hong kong is amazing, so colorful!!!! its hard to beleive...

if u dont get ur postcard b4 UR BIG DAY... HAPPY BIRTHDAY CHICA!!!!!wish i cod be there.

ill try email u agen.

missin ya

soph

BTW hehe theres a whole cosmetic range called Sophie!! hehehehe

nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world.

silhouetted
Senior Member

since 2004-01-30

Posts 537
New Zealand

2 posted 2004-04-12 12:45 PM

HELLO CHICA!!!

omg how is it there?

You sound like ur LOVING it there!
Gees...easter....im full of chocolate... growl

'Sophie' sounds very beautiful, i imagine. lol i think u shood invest in purchasing some for the road. heh people will as wat are you wearing? 'Sophie' GASP

lol i think im a bit hysterical from the chocolate....MWA

LUV LOR

The pain of losing you, is still wanting you near.

But your still gone...and I'm still here

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

3 posted 2004-04-14 11:19 PM

Sopho!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Hey the "Sophie" range sounds great, buy some of it. MMMMMMMmmmmmmmmmmm i just had a whole chunk of easter eggs, Lor what'd you get??????

Nice Poem tho,

Ciao,
Hollow,

Hollow who feels sick with chocolate.

"Why are my visions so unliving with dreams? And why do I no longer care?" - Stygian

River
Senior Member

since 2003-09-16

Posts 627
my own little world

4 posted 2004-04-16 12:12 PM

"Immortality
Keeps me locked up
Keeps me silent
As i scream from the inside"

same here, those are my fave. lines, i like this a lot! Good Job!

- River

sleep my precious slumber

sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

5 posted 2004-04-19 07:34 PM

niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

what do u want me to say more than im soo loving ur poemssssssss

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

6 posted 2004-04-19 10:39 PM

kool. Hong kong huh??? awesome. Seeen any giant lizards lately??? ~Lol~ Amazing poem...

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

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