Dark Poetry #4 |
Youth's Fountain |
devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
The infectiousness of flesh reborn- Stinging sweet in human form, Flailing wild in midnight breeze- Seizing scorn oh- priced defeat... To wear you warm upon my bone- Rubied decision, wrap me "home"... Cradle supple, Dub me young Taste me sweet- upon the tongue... Give in not- to my beg easy, Sculpt harsh lines ~~Divinity~~ Infect. Infect- my mirror show, Neglect. Neglect- this ivory bone... Protrude in mock of certainty- Oh- dub me Young... Eternally. Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
HeyThereGirlieGirl~ I 'see' you ... You still got the talent going on~ Love you ... hope all is well~ E me .. I've lost yours~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hey kitten! Still conjuring the greedy need I see. You haven't lost your touch, m'lovie. Wonderful reading your enchantments again. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
"Protrude in mock of certainty- Oh- dub me Young... Eternally." Here, here! Always good to read your words deTanya. But, alas, it's never enough (greedy me) Hopefully, I'll soon get my own pen kick-started. Ed |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
"Give in not- to my beg easy, Sculpt harsh lines ~~Divinity~~ Infect. Infect- my mirror show, Neglect. Neglect- this ivory bone... Protrude in mock of certainty- Oh- dub me Young... Eternally." This is very cool stuff, Tanya. I'm liking it lots. Good to see you posting... When the power of love overcomes the |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Profoundly young, yet written in an ancient style I haven't heard for many seasons. Thanks, coyote |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Tanya - To wear you warm upon my bone- Rubied decision, wrap me "home"... Cradle supple, Dub me young Taste me sweet- upon the tongue... You will always be what you are a beauty indeed inside and out xxoo |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
It is impossible not to “feel” your words. Always a treat to read you, take care! We live an' learn from our mistakes |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
since when? You will always be younger than me,duh! Good to see some things only improve with age, dearest poetess. And when you remember me...remember my deeds and not my words. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
gasp. sigh. *thump* (and maybe a flutter) It has been too long lovie...ck your mail, I've missed you somethen terrible!! **big wet ones Robbie** Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
same to you T and I hope to see MORE of you now that you know where to find me. Still miss my morning coffee with ya |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
hey now. . . how did I miss this one?? done with the style that only you have my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------------------ I am tired . . . |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice...enjoyed this |
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