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Dark Poetry #4

Leave Me Alone

RaBBiT_K
New Member

since 2004-03-28

Posts 7

0 posted 2004-03-30 02:30 PM

I see you watching me,
Every now and then,
I see you see me bleed,
Wondering if I'll be whole again,

I'd rather be by myself,
Alone and in the dark,
I never did want your help,
I prefer silence in my heart,

I know you care, and that you're always there,
But your love is more then I can take,
I just can't bare, your standing there,
My sanity is at stake,

Leave me alone, on my own,
I need to be alone.

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

1 posted 2004-03-30 10:08 PM

I know how it feels, to want to just be alone, not wanting to let people in. I really like this poem, a lot.

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

2 posted 2004-05-02 06:06 PM

i know its alittle too late for replies on this poem but i truly loved i keep it upp

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

3 posted 2004-05-02 06:10 PM

nice poem.dark indeed.

Destinys_Fallen_Angel
Member

since 2004-05-06

Posts 75
Boise Idaho

4 posted 2004-05-07 12:51 PM

a very dark poem...alone in the world is never a way to go take it from me i've been there...

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EliJah
New Member

since 2004-05-07

Posts 8

5 posted 2004-05-07 11:18 AM

i can relate, i'm glad to read any poetry that helps me understand ppl better and i think this did
keep it up

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