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Dark Poetry #4

Limits

click1
Member

since 2003-03-25

Posts 152
usa

0 posted 2003-10-03 10:13 PM

relegated
to the back row

lost conviction

let it go

is all hope
lost?

suffer in silence
nothing to show

weep in private
tough stuff
portrayed

what to tell at
the end of the day?

questions of silence
who really cares

I'm in it for me
low I dispair

words on a page

so cold and
forlorn

maybe I hate the day I
was born

maybe I
can pull through another day
if not
who cares anyway?

love and hope
a joke in the end

father forgive me
my inocent sin.........

Click

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

1 posted 2003-10-11 01:16 AM

good onnnnneeeeee.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

2 posted 2003-10-12 02:35 PM

Jason,

I do understand these feelings well
but the first person you need to
forgive is you . . . the rest will follow
loved this write
xxoo

Mad_Hatter
Member

since 2003-06-29

Posts 393
Canada

3 posted 2003-10-12 02:43 PM

Wow, this was a very powerful write...I enjoyed it muchly.

Asian Rain
Member

since 2003-10-11

Posts 73

4 posted 2003-10-13 11:30 AM

I agree, a very powerful and moving write!

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