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Copperbell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-08

Posts 956

0 posted 2004-03-03 11:40 AM

A question creeps through my soul
It swells, filling the empty spaces of my spirit
Like waves it hits me, the impact sends me reeling
Falling, and again I have hit the ground

I see a smirk, and it is not mine
But it is saved for me, a snicker that is all mine
To bear
to steal another piece of my heart
   to steal another piece of who I am

There are words
  Tragic words
    I can cry, and it feels good to be so sorry, so sad, even if I can't put my finger on why

    I have been eaten, one bite at a time, by something I have finally put my finger on

    A Lie

I turn one way and people lie, I turn another way and...

even my own mind tells me lies

River
Senior Member

since 2003-09-16

Posts 627
my own little world

1 posted 2004-03-04 04:21 PM

I can't agree more with this one at all...are you like a mind reader or something? maybe this is just more commin than what i thought. nicely said. *claps and adds to library*

- River

sleep my precious slumber

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

2 posted 2004-03-04 10:22 PM

I like it. Nice Write

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However long the night, the dawn will break.

Copperbell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-08

Posts 956

3 posted 2004-03-06 09:24 PM

Thank you, River, in my experience, it is a common experience.

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

4 posted 2005-01-28 12:12 PM

very nice write

does your fire burn? can you hear me? ILL JUST KNOCK THIS WALL RIGHT DOWN

Copperbell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-08

Posts 956

5 posted 2005-01-28 08:14 PM

Thank you Snowflake

tecoyah
Member

since 2003-11-16

Posts 83
NY

6 posted 2005-02-12 09:43 AM

You have captured an emotional response to life, and placed it into the realm of understanding. Hard enough.
But, you have also managed to do so in a beatiful flow, which is much more of a rarity.

Splendid writting.....Thank you

Copperbell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-08

Posts 956

7 posted 2005-02-12 11:54 AM

Appreciate your response Tecoyah - thank you.

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

8 posted 2005-02-12 11:05 PM

I just wonder how people like you and I have such high numbers for posts...
When you hear it so much it becomes you. Slight ouch.

-GIS

Copperbell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-08

Posts 956

9 posted 2005-02-13 01:23 AM

This was one of the best things I ever learned - not everything said about me or even what I thought about me was true. Awesome news!!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

10 posted 2005-02-13 11:53 AM

Yes, a very common experience..loved the way you expressed it.

M

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

11 posted 2005-03-09 04:26 AM

Wow...

"Trina"

Happiness Runs From Me, For I Am It's Enemy, Anyone Who Has It, Is Someone I Envy...

Much Luv,
"Trina"

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