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Starsfalling Member
since 2003-03-18
Posts 94some where deep in the shadows |
Trepidation upon first sight Serene beauty is yours to hold Wisps of hair gently flutter From a masque of falsified perfection Dreams of social inequality and snide remarks Clawing to the top, Upon the backs of friends Who are entirely strangers Darkened hair holds only spiders Curling thin lips hold only a cruel sneer Evil spirits soar above, Appearing as halos and angels Tear all others down Madame of flawlessness Maybe then happiness will truly be yours… Your eyes open wide Never having been told how shamefully, You fake at life Sounds of shattered glass and senseless screaming Waves of torment and shallow pretenses wash over Shorn hair and slit wrists A truly dark day I smile on my merry way… critiques please...its been a while -lance There is no peace among the stars, only an eternity of carnage and slaughter and the laughter of thirsting gods |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
I must return for the critique... but...I like the end quite a bit. till then...Lex |
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Starsfalling Member
since 2003-03-18
Posts 94some where deep in the shadows |
thank ya...and thank you for the critique that is upcoming There is no peace among the stars, only an eternity of carnage and slaughter and the laughter of thirsting gods |
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