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darkness_witch
Senior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
Underneath

0 posted 2004-02-27 02:16 AM

i feel it clawing at me
desperate to grab a hold of me

i feel it climb its way up my leg
desperate to attatch itself onto me

i feel it slide its way under my skin
desperate to become one of me again

alone
empty
and
numb
my
life
seems
destined
to
end
like
a
sudden
car
crash

i feel it take a hold of me
desperate to shake me untill i face it

i feel it bite into me
desperate to intoxicate me with its posion

i feel it tear at my heart
desperate to leave me with no will to live

heart-less
trapped
and
pained
i
fear
i
will
be
forced
to
stay

i feel it empty me
desperate to strip me from all i have known

i feel it eat away at my concious
desperate to make me feel as depressed as ever

i feel it kill my emotions
desperate to make me numb

my
forbidden
love
is
all
that
can
keep
me
holding
on

but its too late for you to help me now
you missed your chance
not that you would've taken it

You can always hear a tear in Cobain's voice, the pain going on there is always visible through his lyrics - Marilon Manson

silhouetted
Senior Member

since 2004-01-30

Posts 537
New Zealand

1 posted 2004-02-27 02:19 AM

sophie

this is well theres only one word for it.

Beautiful.

I really really like this. LOVE it infact.

You do me proud everytime you post a poem, because they are all from the heart.

MISSN U MAD

LOR

In the bible on angels have wings, and the rest must wait to be saved - Jewel

River
Senior Member

since 2003-09-16

Posts 627
my own little world

2 posted 2004-02-27 03:29 PM

sheesh chik, you really know how to write about nightmares...*gets chills remembering all the creepy crawly dreams* this is groovin rokin great! *hides under the covers* and about the destiny thing...don't assume anything about it especially if you don't want it to come true...*but then again you never know with these darkies- what they are really thinking* lol. have a groovy day.

- River

sleep my precious slumber

darkness_witch
Senior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
Underneath

3 posted 2004-02-27 04:36 PM

thanx laura! you are like my idol when it comes to writing chica!

thanx river!! thats a compliment cus i want to be a scary and spoky writer, but with a purpose, if that makes any sense!!

thnx for even bothering to read. it makes it all worthwhile!

catch yas on the flipside

darkness

You can always hear a tear in Cobain's voice, the pain going on there is always visible through his lyrics - Marilon Manson

darkstar
Member

since 2000-08-09

Posts 230
Port Richey, Fl, USA

4 posted 2004-02-27 06:21 PM

I
love
the
style
...

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