Dark Poetry #4 |
Just Eleven |
junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
this is dedicated to James a boy i know. who is currently in hospital. love from June x His daily diet of food and tears The only shield against his fears He withdraws to dwell deep inside Too deeply embarassed to confide He bravely sets out to face another day Scared to venture at what they'll say Hating himselffor being what they percieve A worthless fat boy ?he can now believe. Regretting the comfort of last nights need, that caused him to wallow in another feed Just eleven and alreadyscarred too much Cruelty has beaten him with many a touch His needs are invisible, his smiles manufactured Dwelling alone in his room, his spirit fractured The boy is failing in a world that doesn't care At only twelve, I ask, will he still be there ? |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
This is very prominent at the moment. Overweight children are bullied at school causing great distress. A very good write June. Maggie |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
thanks maggie, James is a beautiful boy and it breaks my heart to know he can't bare anymore torment. I feel so helpless. hugs from june x |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
good luck to him and you. its heartbreaking to hear about this, but i have faith that everything will pull through, he just needs the comfort you obviously are giving him. do you agree? its unbelievable how cruel some children are to those different from themselves. this is a beautiful poem. heart breaking and tearful. with love to you and james darkness You can always hear a tear in Cobain's voice, the pain going on there is always visible through his lyrics - Marilon Manson |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
Tell him taht this torment will pass for me huh? I know how it feels to be overweight, i used to be myself, and i still think i am. I try not to care or think about it. Beautiful poem. ~Vampire Kisses I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh...sad |
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