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Dark Poetry #4

Last memory of you...

Paragon
Member

since 2003-02-16

Posts 114

0 posted 2004-02-02 12:21 PM

Here's my jagged reminder of you
lets hope these scars hold true
cause this is my last memory of you

the lighter is searing my flesh
I can forget the rest
but let me remember this

this pain inside my heart
this lone tear in the dark
the ending of our beautiful start

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

1 posted 2004-02-05 12:51 PM

not such a bright last momory huh...nice write

"So what befalls the flawless?
Look what I've built, it shines so beautifully now watch as it destroys me."

darkness_witch
Senior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
Underneath

2 posted 2004-02-05 06:48 PM

Beuatiful,,,, in a weird, twisted way

You can always hear a tear in Cobain's voice, the pain going on there is always visible through his lyrics - Marilon Manson

Eromyna
Member

since 2002-11-29

Posts 306
Pheonix, AZ, USA

3 posted 2004-02-06 10:49 AM

Niiiiiiiiice.

"I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation."

Eromyna
Member

since 2002-11-29

Posts 306
Pheonix, AZ, USA

4 posted 2004-02-06 10:50 AM

Niiiiiiiiice.

"I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation."

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