Dark Poetry #4 |
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Endlessecho Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 398I live within myself |
Jump into my skin And go for a swim. Crawl into my veins And feel all the pains That you’ve caused me. Float around in my head And listen to words you’ve said. And try not to be scared. I’ve lived with that fear. You can visit here. You owe me that much And so much more. Bury yourself into my heart And see if you can keep it beating Because it’s becoming too hard for me. You drenched me in my own blood. And you’ve drowned me under my own thoughts. You have all my strength, so Use it to visit me. Visit and discover everything you left behind The other times you dropped by. |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
s$*^t that is brutal dammit f&$K that has shocked me and chilled me to the bone i totally can relate to that man that is seriously hardcore "stuff" i love it i honestly dont know what to say, i cant explain how much that has tou8ched me and how much i understand it amazing amazing amazing can i plz put it in a folder i have of all the best poems ive read i would really like to, but if you dont wnat to im sweet with that it is seriously one of best poems i have honestly ever read hardcore darkness |
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Endlessecho Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 398I live within myself |
Wow - darkness - thank you. I'm really glad the poem could touch you so deeply. Well, as glad as I can be considering the matter of the poem. ;-) Anyway.. you're welcome to put it in a folder and keep it. It's amazing when someone appreciates you're words that much. |
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Justin Deen New Member
since 2004-01-22
Posts 7London, UK |
Loved the way you explaind you're feelings, great writing! |
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