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Dark Poetry #4

Ragged Clouds

cusick
Senior Member

since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

0 posted 2004-01-19 09:18 AM

A fitful moon tore
through ragged clouds,
stars were shy.

Madness touched him that night.
She, frivolous,
unrepentant.

Their hearts had
beat as one as they
swayed to the tango
but she had danced with another.

Steel lanced poison.

He held her close
through the night,
keeping her warm.

Morning came,
she lay cold.

River
Senior Member

since 2003-09-16

Posts 627
my own little world

1 posted 2004-01-19 08:14 PM

wow...this is well done, very artistic...and shocking

- River

rest upon existence. seek life,
and forever never die.

darkness_witch
Senior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
Underneath

2 posted 2004-01-20 01:05 AM

wow
i loved this

i loved how it twisted at the end. very cool write!

keep posting cus I havent seen much of ur stuff

l8s

darkness

cusick
Senior Member

since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

3 posted 2004-01-20 05:13 AM

Thank you so much River. Maggie

cusick
Senior Member

since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

4 posted 2004-01-20 05:14 AM

Much appreciateddarkness. Maggie

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