Dark Poetry #4 |
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evil with power |
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Gothika_07 Member
since 2004-01-15
Posts 61new zealand |
you cringe as i yell at you yet you stay still as a statue stubborn and adoring still until one day i'll make the kill to get you away from me so ur not my liability after this fight we can get this right you think and hope you know you could neva cope and this angers me more i make a move to the door but i see the deep unrealenting pains the coarses through your tightening viens i freeze for a while deny this denial my eyes fill with mournful tears i wish i didnt feel these fears so i ease my hand from the door but then memories begin to conjure blood soaked skin stretched so thin a horrific and hideous yell i wake up to a living hell and remember why i was leaving there was no time for my greiving i look back into your eyes and remeber those vendictive lies i will be your prisoner forever being free i will never i am the princess in the tower but i hve no prince, jst evil wiv power |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
![]() gasp dudette that was hardcore!!! i loved it heaps!!! it so amazingly good... wow its so diofferent from wat u usually do yaknow??? u used simple words !!! tee hee post more. catch u on the flipside rock on Darkness |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
the scary grinning face was supposed to be a shoked face... sry!! :$ |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Leave love and find yourself peace. Maggie |
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serenities_blood Member
since 2003-12-21
Posts 56New Zealand |
HEY BEXUS!!! Laura here if ya didnt no... I HAVE FALLEN IN LOVE WITH THE LAST PARAGRAPH i am the princess in the tower but i hve no prince, jst evil wiv power I LOVE IT SOO MUCH BEXUS OMG BEX!!!!!!! xoxLORxox |
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Endlessecho Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 398I live within myself |
Very real. I could see it all. Feel it. Great expression of the raw emotion - not prettied up. confused, jumbled, uncertain - unfortunately - very real. |
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Vagabond Member
since 2004-01-23
Posts 163 |
-flop- *fellover with saprise to keep me from hiveing to say anything* (I don't know what to say) (I'll try) I really liked it. I could fell it and see it i loved it!!! Vagabon the Lost One |
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