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Dark Poetry #4

Evolution

Tourniquet
Junior Member

since 2003-09-18

Posts 13

0 posted 2003-10-02 11:14 AM

So, mankind survives
Frantic for breath
And hope dies –
Suffocating humanity
Desperation floods the world
Giving birth to an epidemic of fear
Hate conquers us all,
Whilst love is lost..
Revenge easily becomes the answer
Alas, the questions are wrong
So, united – We die
A little death each day
Watching, as the world bathes in blood.
Slowly, peace is distinguished
Replaced by the new holocaust-
Modern Man.
Suicidal by nature,
Our own unmerciful Lucifer-
Hates creation
Bred from sadness, the bringer of grief
Damning us, Entwined
As we kill each other-
My brothers, my sisters..

An angels breath
A willows whisper
A tear drops

As we kill each other.

cusick
Senior Member

since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

1 posted 2003-10-02 01:23 PM

I have a poem on the same theme. Very impressed. The images makes me feel cold Maggie

River
Senior Member

since 2003-09-16

Posts 627
my own little world

2 posted 2003-10-02 08:14 PM

very very true. i like this poem, great job =)

A river of change is rushing over me, through me. Forfeit to the waters, forget the past, live in the present.

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