Dark Poetry #4 |
ParkingLots |
buckysimone Junior Member
since 2003-10-19
Posts 27 |
Parking lots Of Empty hearts Robotic minds unrest And through the silhouettes Silhouettes of uncertain lies Dead roses and tattered paintings Waxy fingers and toes Walking like a babies beginning Off-centered by salty pasts Think alike Through thick and thin Mechanical minds and childhood dreams Dreams of industrial futures Up brings identical beings Sick and tired Death and daunting Halting machines Completing their stops A new path, new people Let's drive Drive away This parking lot |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
I don't think I want to park there either Let's do...let's pass this one on by. I liked. Love, Terri~ Well I will go down with this ship |
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TheGirlNoOneKnew Member
since 2003-12-04
Posts 92PA, USA |
Very deep piece. Nice and descriptive. I liked it alot. |
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