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darkness_witch
Senior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
Underneath

0 posted 2004-01-17 01:28 AM

Once again
You disregard

How my heart bleeds
And how my wounds cry

Once again
You disregard

How my tears burn
And how my hands are cold

Once again
You disregard

How glazed my eyes are
And how tired I am

So now
I disregard

All the beautys of the world
And all the caring faces

So now
I disregard

All reasons to live
And all reasons to stay

Be careful who you disregard
Each face is worth a second glance

Each heart is never worthy of breaking
Each life never worthy of taking

Gothika_07
Member

since 2004-01-15

Posts 61
new zealand

1 posted 2004-01-17 05:01 AM

HELL YEH!!!

THAT IS WOT IM TLKIN ABOUT MAN!
WNDRIN WEN U'D CME ON FAT HEAD.

GOD U NO THAT WUD B SUCH A MEAN AS SNG AS WELL AS POEM.

KEEP ON WRITIN

XXgothikXX

Ladycat

Senior Member

since 1999-07-05

Posts 782
At the edge and a doorway,TX

2 posted 2004-01-17 06:30 AM

Yep, that is it. I know the feeling all too well. Thank you so much for this. If you will let me I would love to add this piece to my library so that I can read it to a few ppl later.

Yea, keep writing and I will keep reading.

Love,
Ladycat

Dancing is the loftiest, the most moving, the most
beautiful of the arts, because it is no mere translation
or abstraction from life; IT IS LIFE I

darkness_witch
Senior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
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3 posted 2004-01-18 02:39 AM

Thanks guys!

bexus, thnx dudette, 'preciate

Ladycat, I would be "honoured!" (lol)

didnt find my poem to hardcore, done betta...

see yous on the flipside!!!

rock on

Vagabond
Member

since 2004-01-23

Posts 163

4 posted 2004-01-27 12:23 PM

i agree with Gothika_7

Vagabon the Lost One

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

5 posted 2004-01-27 06:18 PM

no life is ever worth taking...

"So what befalls the flawless?
Look what I've built, it shines so beautifully now watch as it destroys me."

serenities_blood
Member

since 2003-12-21

Posts 56
New Zealand

6 posted 2004-01-27 11:17 PM

it was good mate
but i didnt feel ur heart in it
i agree with u wen u sed it wasnt too hardcore, uve dun beta

all and all it was alrite and i did see ur purpose
LUV YA
LOR

xoxLORxox

Who says a woman cannot serve?
It would be my pleasure

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2004-02-23 03:10 AM

I could have written this

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

8 posted 2004-02-23 04:46 PM

Very nice, Very nice. The ending was amazin'!!

~Vampire Kisses

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

darkness_witch
Senior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
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9 posted 2004-02-24 01:57 AM

thanx every1 for commenting.
passing shadow, wat do you mean?
thanx every1

darkness

You can always hear a tear in Cobain's voice, the pain going on there is always visible through his lyrics - Marilon Manson

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