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Gothika_07 Member
since 2004-01-15
Posts 61new zealand |
harshness bitterness is what you scream at me blackness darkness is all that i can see loving caring is what i'm meant to be running crying is how i'm gunna flee regretfully mournfully is how i start to plea ruefully gracefully for all eternity [This message has been edited by Gothika_07 (01-16-2004 12:14 AM).] |
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Xonicx Junior Member
since 2004-01-14
Posts 20Vancouver, WA |
For Eternity. That would be a great finishing line, but that is just me. I Like it alot, and good job. For eternity would give the final kick kinda, but good job! -------------------------------- |
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Gothika_07 Member
since 2004-01-15
Posts 61new zealand |
thxn 4 the idea i hpe u dnt mind me using it yeh it dos finish the poem off ai? xxgothikaxx |
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Xonicx Junior Member
since 2004-01-14
Posts 20Vancouver, WA |
Yeah, it looks good. Check ur mail on the server thingy here, I wrote you an email. -------------------------------- |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
very good write,,,,,dits the point well Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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Necro Draconis Member
since 2000-05-19
Posts 115 |
Excellent  I will have to disagree with the "for eternity" ending. I like it the way it is. It flows a little better this way I think?!? We spend our whole lives trying to live, only to realize that we don’t know what life is truly about until it is too late. |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
OMG BEX THIS ROCKS!!! yer i agree wit Necro... for all eternity is way better dudette!!! omg i am amazed bex!! this is so hardcore! lovin it rock on |
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