Dark Poetry #4 |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Evaporated soul, No place to go, She knows, Then the confusion sets in, Relic of forgotten times, Remorseful eyes, She knows, Then the numbness evolves, Wandering thoughts, Expressionless terror, She knows, Then the anguish emerges, Weary of the burden, Possessing black, She knows, Then the darkness shelters, Poisoned opinion, Infected mind, She knows, Then she realizes, She never knew, Only assumed, Only accused, If only she knew. However long the night, the dawn will break. |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
"Poisoned opinion, Infected mind, She knows, Then she realizes, She never knew, Only assumed, Only accused, If only she knew." This part wuz awesome~the ending i mean. Very kool twist thang goin on. ~lol~ !VaMpIrE KiSsEs! I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
Evaporated soul, No place to go, She knows, Then the confusion sets in, Relic of forgotten times, Remorseful eyes, She knows, Then the numbness evolves, LOVED IT THIS ONE ROCKS OMG IT ROCKS SO HARDCORE I CANT BELEVE IT AHHH I LOVED IT KEEP ROCKIN N ROLLIN darkness You can always hear a tear in Cobain's voice, the pain going on there is always visible through his lyrics - Marilon Manson |
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Vagabond Member
since 2004-01-23
Posts 163 |
She never knew, Only assumed, Only accused, If only she knew If only she knew... Vagabon the Lost One |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
i liked. |
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darkstar Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230Port Richey, Fl, USA |
if only I knew...hehe awesome |
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