Dark Poetry #4 |
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I Hate You |
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Melodious_silence Junior Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 37 |
Hope you bleed Hope you cry Hope you scream Hope you die Hope you suffer Hope you sacrifice Hope you smother Hope you say good-bye Hope it hurts Hope it stings Hope it is worse Hope it is everlasting Hate you all Hate the world Hope you fall Hope you curdle Hope you rot Hope you corrode Hate you more often that not Hate you error connection code |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
wow...this is very...hatefull. (i know...DUHH???) =). - River Love hurts as bad as it feels good. |
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tainted_love123 Junior Member
since 2004-01-03
Posts 11Australia |
its a very powerful write, it has a deeper meaning |
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Ixxi Member
since 2004-01-02
Posts 77England |
Ouch harsh... That actually hurt my feelings. Weird or what? hehe, very good. |
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sweet_lost_palestinian1 Member
since 2004-01-08
Posts 90 |
wow...i never felt people could hate in this kind of way...welll listen take my advice ..HATING WILL ONLY LEAD YOU TO HELL IN THE WORLD AND IN THE END ...SOO JUST FORGIVE EVEN IF HE KILLLED YOU...ONE DAY HE WILL PAY BACK..... |
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Mad_Hatter Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393Canada |
Poetry is one of the best ways to release our hate and you did it very well...I liked this one. |
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