Dark Poetry #4 |
Albatross |
coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
weigh anchor hoist anew this body flag soul swung yardarm my albatross your wedding vows I do crossbows proclaim feathered kills maliced bolts misaimed astray strike deep the wedge a well kept heartbreak bleeds brightly upon the sharks for wind © WFS 2003 "Who knows if to live is to be dead, and to be dead, to live? And we really, it may be, are dead; in fact I once heard sages say that we are now dead, and the body is our tomb." Socrates [This message has been edited by coyote (12-25-2003 03:15 PM).] |
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wintertao Member
since 2003-11-17
Posts 366Okaloosa Island, FL |
I like your creative style here, well done |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Well dang, I wish I could say that I can't relate . . . And one can be at sea too long, I suspect. |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Thanks, tao. For the read and kind comments. CB 8) |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Aye, Thanks Cap'n Kraw. Glad ya could relate to the "voyage". CB 8) |
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Necro Draconis Member
since 2000-05-19
Posts 115 |
Nice style and fun to read. Two thumbs up! We spend our whole lives trying to live, only to realize that we don’t know what life is truly about until it is too late. |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Thanks for reading and replying so kindly, Necro Draconus. CB 8) |
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eminor_angel Member
since 2003-05-22
Posts 323Canada |
wow . . . this is interesting. I don't lie about these things, by the way. I think we all should be a little more selective about comments. If every poem is "well written!!!!" then they are all worthless, for nobody can tell the difference. Long rant, though, not for here. Again, nice write. |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Ahh yes...I couldn't agree more, m'friend. Thanks for the read and your very quotable comments. CB 8) |
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