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Dark Poetry #4

Eulogy For A Love Song

Ziro Valentine
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since 2008-12-21

Posts 2

0 posted 2008-12-21 03:12 AM

Days are dreary nights are cold,
reach out for something left to hold,
stained glass windows pure and pale,
devoid of feeling as I exhale.

The silent line no longer hurts,
since daylight grayed a final verse,
to speak to tell to sing aloud,
beyond the memories never found.

A final breath before the plunge,
we open up our hearts and lungs,
while flowing ever gracefully,
beyond the desert to the sea.

I slowly sink beneath the waves,
take comfort in a watery grave,
and warming smiles that I have found,
lay broken here beneath the ground.

prize
Member

since 2008-11-21

Posts 116

1 posted 2008-12-21 11:42 AM

Thanks for your share - very moving. I really enjoyed reading your poem - read it a few times...

It flows very well with great imagery, especially in the last two stanzas.

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Abbeon
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since 2006-11-30

Posts 228
Curiousity, and wonder

2 posted 2009-01-05 01:02 PM

i read your words, and they linger in my shatered thoughts. Its time for the words to flow. Thank you.

Words have power, Im going to unleash the power of my soul.

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