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Dark Poetry #4

not much of a prize

norunnin
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since 2008-10-16

Posts 71

0 posted 2008-12-18 07:32 PM

devils fight fight fight
over the hole within my soul
alright alright alright
you can have control over the hole withn my soul
its your devil
i can see you calmly revel
but i dont think you realize
that my soul is not much of a prize

shades_of_green
New Member

since 2008-12-17

Posts 8

1 posted 2008-12-18 08:56 PM

So you discovered the power of repetition as well. I really enjoyed this poem!

prize
Member

since 2008-11-21

Posts 116

2 posted 2008-12-19 12:36 PM

very well done

funny, your title describes my 'username' it is a name formed out of sarcasm, because i always feel i'm 'not much of a prize'.

Thanks for sharing ~P

norunnin
Member

since 2008-10-16

Posts 71

3 posted 2008-12-19 04:40 PM

i need to hone my skillz.
but thanks for the support

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