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shades_of_green
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since 2008-12-17
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0 posted 2008-12-18 01:26 PM


Writing, writing, pen goes flying
Thinking, thinking, mind starts lying
Speaking, speaking, words are trying
Hoping, hoping, they stop crying

Weakly, weakly, they get console
Slowly, slowly, you have control
Swiftly, swiftly, we're united
Quickly, quickly, I am slighted

Once embedded,
Lost, and shredded
Once beheaded,
Back, and dreaded

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norunnin
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since 2008-10-16
Posts 71

1 posted 2008-12-18 07:37 PM


interesting style.
i want to see more

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