Dark Poetry #4 |
the animal inside us all |
Wet Member
since 1999-07-25
Posts 60Brentwood, Tn |
Animal In nature everything has a death-date In reality everything wants to be free. But here it makes my body seperate From the animal deep with-in me. I once had so many problems I ignored them when they came. But now that I have so few I never feel the same. My problems boiled with-in me It made my life, turn into fate. But tell me why this happens When my animal is filled with hate. I had a fire inside me One I couldn't see. It then burned uncontrolbly From the animal deep with-in me. |
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Mad_Hatter Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393Canada |
Very nice poem, the animals within us all, tends to get the better of us. Keep writing. |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
I like this, very nice =) - River Love hurts as bad as it feels good. |
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Lozza New Member
since 2003-12-22
Posts 5New Zealander (in UK) |
I can relate to this piece totally. a great read. |
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