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shiliopn
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since 2008-10-05
Posts 8
Canada

0 posted 2008-10-05 10:58 PM


I strive day by day to live
happy
carefree
hopeful
optimistic
alive...
I have managed to live
happy for others, that one day they'll be rid of me
hopeful that the pain will stop...even when it doesn't
optimistic that nothing could get worse...even if nothing gets better
alive on the outside but always hollow

one person knows of my shadows...
the story of my thirteenth year...my innocence lost
the scars covering my body, heart, and soul
the pain i live for every day...

he has held me here for quite some time...
he makes me live happy to be alive
hopeful that I'm in control
optimistic that one day things will get better
alive with just a bit of light inside

he is like my brother...
he is my friend
always here
even if we're not in the same room...
he held me up when i fell

© Copyright 2008 Sean W. Frewin - All Rights Reserved
midnightdreamer
Member
since 2008-02-03
Posts 309
Roy,ut
1 posted 2008-10-06 05:32 PM


this is sad. but really really beautiful. keep up the great work and welcome to PIP!!!!

midnightdreamer

She past you, but doesn't notice you.
Drained from emotion
she waits till death grasps her.
She faces it with no fear but rather welcomes it.

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