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Dark Poetry #4

The Morning-Midnight Sitdown

SilhouetteMarquis
Junior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 32

0 posted 2008-09-27 11:46 PM

Awakening from silent slumber,
lying in my bed
Again I see these horrid visions,
racing through my head.
And there I lie, with slight convulsions;
heart, it's pace now sped.
The sight of myself withering,
and now among the dead.

As any life will have its moments
minds have pictures, torn
From passing hands and mineral traces
Mine, from what I mourn.
And friends, I dare not look to faces
Young, but ever-worn
To read your eyes upon your passing
Why had I been born?

Reclusivness is what I hope for
Damn this grim disease!
As certain people all around me
Do as they shall please.
And this acceptance of my malice
has me on my knees
Now pleading for alleviation
from these memories.

An apparition slowly rises
Up from bloodied ground
A corporeal form of life
So small, to thee astound.
Again, again! Reflections of me!
A childhood now found.
A promised purity of actions
Shown to evil, drowned.

So help me,God. What was that promise?
As minutes, oh so dreigh?
Continue trust? Defend your mercy.
(What I'll never be?)
However way I've brought my downfall
On the floor I plea.
And that small child whispered softly
"The Innocence of me."

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

1 posted 2008-10-02 03:20 AM

AMAZING.. your have a wonderful talents. And to the ppl who haven't read ur poem.. They don't know what they are missing out on!

pyre
Member

since 2008-05-16

Posts 136

2 posted 2008-10-02 02:58 PM

"A promised purity of actions
Shown to evil, drowned"

i liked this line. it has a touch of tragedy simply put.

Does she pray? Am I prey? The strength of reality demands honesty and this path is in a shovel...

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