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Dark Poetry #4

Transformation

The Esoteric Being
Junior Member

since 2008-07-22

Posts 34
MA, USA

0 posted 2008-09-22 02:05 AM

    Turning in every direction,
       I search for you.
    Trapped in this perpetual maze,
       My goal out of reach.
    An eternity passes by,
       Heightening my fears.
    Panic stricken and vertigo,
       Haphazardly we collide.
    My mask of valor melts away,
       Revealing my reliance.
    Turning in every direction,
       I search for an escape.

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The Esoteric Being

Kaos
Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 317
between space and time

1 posted 2008-09-23 03:21 AM

great use of vocab and imagery. short and to the point yet such detailed emotion... excellent write.

"And behold, a pale horse, and the man who sat on him was Death, and Hell followed with him." - Revelations

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