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SlowlyFallAway
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0 posted 2008-09-07 10:11 AM


Tear away from the supernatural love holding you back

Hatred runs through your veins a life lost value

Annihilate the destructor of fate watch the fire die inside you

Suppress the anger you've been withholding for so long the past behind you

And now you watch with your corrupted eyes as they break us

Too many times youve tried to fake it I see through the tears

A crimson moon floats off into the darkness

Nightfalls, withdrawl

Disguised pain covered in blood theyll never see

Hope deteriorates dwelling beneathe all the lies you spit

Blindness overtakes you twisting what this has become

And the light inside is fading

The corpse you are decaying

Tomorrows promise has become the shadow of today

Cry silently as the blade digs into cold flesh

Feel the demons as they dissever your breaking neck

Your lungs collapse and you look past a glimpse of the end

This is your life, your disclosure

No one is here to guide you except the mistakes fallen to the past

Confessions of murder leak from your mouth

This will only last to the extent of your stupidity


Emily Shives

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1 posted 2008-09-09 04:30 PM


"A crimson moon floats off into the darkness" Wow that's an amazing image, haunting and unforgettable!
GothicCherry
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2 posted 2008-09-24 02:20 PM


amazing
HeliaHeart
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3 posted 2008-11-26 06:39 PM


My that was astonishing.
Its haunting, crying unforgetably in the confines of the human mind, its ehcos endless. Beautiful...

~Lia
"Live as if you were to die tomorrow, Learn as if you were to live forever"
-M. K. Ghandi

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