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Girls's Dreams |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys 
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Literate and stylish Kissable and quiet Laughable in silence That’s what girls dreams are made of With a girl on your arm You prance around With your heart on your sleeve But yet you are deceived ...don't hold your breath Turning words into many pronouns Adjectives can't describe this More like expletives At the tip of my tongue I stand corrected Lipstick on his collar You think that was crafty He just ignores it Don’t speak I know just what it is The scars tell me all Hold your breath because you only make things worse Literate and stylish Kissable and quiet Laughable in silence That’s what girls dreams are made of This is me with my eye down the Scope of a barrel Remind me not to ever Act this way again You try hard to deceive But I already believe "So what befalls the flawless? |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Girls, probably one of the hardest species on the planet to trust. lol. Nice write. GIS Closed will remain closed until opened. |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
yep, thanks "So what befalls the flawless? |
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Mad_Hatter Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393Canada |
Nicely done as always sir.  |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
awww eor, this is sad. =(. well, it was groovy, ok? have a groovy day. =) *hugs* - River Love hurts as bad as it feels good. |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
eor my man, emotion becomes you lately. I LIKE. The best for the Holidays my fellow poet. poe If nothing is something |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah...cool write |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
Nice, but guys are just as hard to trust. But you seem like you arent. I loved te poem. ~Vampire Kisses  I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
u say girls r the hardest species to work out? Gees u obviously hadnt had relationships with men (that i'm glad of on that one level) they can be happy or sad in a matter of moments before being clear of all emotions watsoever! i think girls know what they want and men tend to change their minds while with theyre with girls...and thats wat makes them unsure of us! just my thoughts! LOR In the bible on angels have wings, and the rest must wait to be saved - Jewel |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
well...I really agree with you. I love how you wrote this, creative and to the point. Nice job. I despise being asociated with women. (cringe) some are just plain...evil. |
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darkstar Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230Port Richey, Fl, USA |
very taking back sunday-esque |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Oh, sad and potent, nicely written. PS-I've known some guys like this too. |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
thanks for all your comments, but dont take this as a hit against women, menare just as bad, if not worse, this is just a story, perspective...not a dis against the woman as a whole "So what befalls the flawless? |
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Sweetest Sorrow X Member
since 2004-01-19
Posts 146From a cradle to a casket |
was the blend of a lot of brand New Songs and Taking back sunday songs was cool....... Did you mean to do that... |
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nn Member
since 2000-09-18
Posts 75 |
Interesting |
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