Dark Poetry #4 |
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My favorite scar |
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Revon Junior Member
since 2008-08-29
Posts 15 |
Trying harder then I ever should Begging more then I ever would The question asked as I stared The awnser is you never cared As I shed a pain drenched tear Finally it comes crystal clear Every word you said was a lie You could care less if I live or die I trusted you with my unbroken heart I should have realized you’d break it from the start I’m not good enough, I will never be This is why you can’t love me With you honestly never got me far Remember baby, you will always be my favorite scar - My favorite lie was the one where you said you love me. - Unknown |
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JenniferMaxwell![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2006-09-14
Posts 2423 |
"- Unknown" Does that mean you didn't write the poem? |
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Revon Junior Member
since 2008-08-29
Posts 15 |
Errrr sorry. The unknown is a quote. I wrote up to the -. |
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NormalitxButterfly Member
since 2008-07-09
Posts 107 |
i like it. "you will always be my favorite scar" that part caught me. |
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ladylisa Member
since 2007-04-29
Posts 342Florida USA |
I liked this poem. It represents a lot of people and how they are lied to and used. Lis |
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midnightdreamer Member
since 2008-02-03
Posts 309Roy,ut |
this reminds me of..me. midngihtdreamer "It was heaven........right in the center of hell" Bella from New Moon |
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midnightdreamer Member
since 2008-02-03
Posts 309Roy,ut |
Great poem though!!!! midnightdreamer "It was heaven........right in the center of hell" Bella from New Moon |
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