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Dark Poetry #4

When Is Love

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

0 posted 2004-02-23 11:15 PM

When teardrops stumble,
That is pain,

Is it so tough?
If it can break your heart?

When sweethearts fray,
That is anger,

Is it so forceful?
If it can hold back?

When limits thaw,
That is hatred,

Is it so pure?
If it can be untruthful?

When thoughts entwine,
That is guilt,

Is it so soft?
If it doesn't cushion our fall?

When smiles broaden,
That is love,

Is it so nice?
If it can be unfriendly?

When you see me,
That is only me,
But can't you see i'm struggling with the when inside.

You said you were love.
Then i guess it isn't worth loving.

However long the night, the dawn will break.

silhouetted
Senior Member

since 2004-01-30

Posts 537
New Zealand

1 posted 2004-02-23 11:18 PM

When you see me,
That is only me,
But can't you see i'm struggling with the when inside.

I LOVED THAT PART
that was the best bit i think

nice endn saggster

LOR

In the bible on angels have wings, and the rest must wait to be saved - Jewel

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

2 posted 2004-02-23 11:20 PM

Yeah thats my fave part too! i found this like two days ago, but i must have written it ages ago........

However long the night, the dawn will break.

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

3 posted 2004-02-24 06:31 PM

dido w/ silhouetted. This poem was kool. I liked it a lot.

~Vampire Kisses

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

Gemini
Senior Member

since 1999-12-15

Posts 1203
Wisconsin, USA

4 posted 2004-02-24 09:03 PM

Nice read, very thought provoking.

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