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NormalitxButterfly Member
since 2008-07-09
Posts 107 |
We falter becoming shadows memories of a light that has already died if only we had met before perhaps things could be different perhaps I would be different I now live a walking corpse wandering the darkness without reason without hope you can not follow me here can you? you can not save me now even now the memory of my light fades My world crumbles I do not know when the falling started time has become meaningless hours min seconds cutting into flesh I have been here before though it was not as dark not as cold I have lost sight of you I have lost sight of everything awaiting the end I bleed I breath I falter |
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BeyaK Member
since 2008-08-07
Posts 126Philippines |
nice... |
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NormalitxButterfly Member
since 2008-07-09
Posts 107 |
thank you |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Loss of youthful innocence portrayed as death. Perhaps you might like to take comfort in the fact that throughout the course of your life you will have occasion to write poems like this again. In life we birth new selves all the time only to have them die later on. Life's short. Think hard! |
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lilshortcake Junior Member
since 2008-08-11
Posts 10No Comment |
Wonderful is all I can say. Talent is like food! You shouldn't waste it. |
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