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Just.Another.Falling.Star
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since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

0 posted 2008-07-28 10:44 AM

Falling...
An unending silence.
The sounds of nothing,
Are torturous to my ears.
Someone save me.
Someone help me.
Someone love me.
Someone remember me.
Someone love me.

Falling...
An endurance of pain.
The whips of consequence
Lash at my back.
Someone save me.
Someone help me.
Someone love me.
Someone remember me.
Someone love me.

Falling...
A search for acceptance.
The agony of emotions
Never stopping to let me breath.
Someone save me.
Someone help me.
Someone love me.
Someone remember me.
Someone love me.

Someone love me...

~*Julianna*~

"You don't know me...but I know you. That's all that matters right now... Mr.Rainey!" - Secret Window

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

1 posted 2008-07-29 12:55 PM

I love this. Three well written and important points all driven home with the repetition. Awesome write.

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`·

Just.Another.Falling.Star
Member

since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

2 posted 2008-08-05 03:06 PM

Thanks so much. This was just on the top of my head and I needed to get it out, otherwise I would've been lashing out at my parents all day long, if you know what I mean.

~*Julianna*~

"You don't know me...but I know you. That's all that matters right now... Mr.Rainey!" - Secret Window

BeyaK
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since 2008-08-07

Posts 126
Philippines

3 posted 2008-08-08 05:28 AM

i like reading this... nice

XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

4 posted 2008-08-08 04:02 PM

awe, Julianna! I know how you feel hun but remember that me lala and fungus will always love you...even if you don't let us in your kitchen at all..not even to help you with cleaning. Great write.

{~~*~~}

"You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans....#}
{~Emily~}

Mystress May
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since 2007-10-25

Posts 296
Taunton, MA

5 posted 2008-08-08 06:26 PM

I really like this one a lot. Great job!

Our scars are the foundation for what we have become

Just.Another.Falling.Star
Member

since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

6 posted 2008-08-09 12:28 PM

thanks everyone!!! and by the way em...i know that you and lala and fungus will be there, even if your not with me in my kitchen (which WILL have a cleaning chart with ALL our names on it, lol)

~*Julianna*~

"You don't know me...but I know you. That's all that matters right now... Mr.Rainey!" - Secret Window

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

7 posted 2008-09-04 09:44 AM

Simply amazing Julianna. If you need someone to cheer you up, I'll be here with my magic trick's!!!

-pulls out his magic wand and taps on his open palm and a bouquet of flowers magically appears!- *Gasps!* lol.

Great poem!

-Zach

Just.Another.Falling.Star
Member

since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

8 posted 2008-09-04 05:06 PM

thanks zach!!!!! your magic tricks always do cheer me up! and thanks for the flowers *smells them* they're wonderful!

~*Julianna*~

"You don't know me...but I know you. That's all that matters right now... Mr.Rainey!" - Secret Window

midnightdreamer
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since 2008-02-03

Posts 309
Roy,ut

9 posted 2008-09-04 07:36 PM

amazing writer. i don't know if you want me to feel the same. but i fell that way a lot in life. Great poem!!

midnightdreamer

"It was heaven........right in the center of hell" Bella from New Moon

Just.Another.Falling.Star
Member

since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

10 posted 2008-09-04 07:59 PM

thanks for the review midnightdreamer! and i'm sorry you too have to feel the same way. thanks again!

~*Julianna*~

"You don't know me...but I know you. That's all that matters right now... Mr.Rainey!" - Secret Window

lilshortcake
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since 2008-08-11

Posts 10
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11 posted 2008-09-05 05:25 PM

Some one love this poem...

I DO!

-Tammy.G

Talent is like food! You shouldn't waste it.

wwzwlmd8
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since 2006-09-23

Posts 96
San Diego,CA

12 posted 2008-09-07 05:15 AM

this was so great... great job

Just.Another.Falling.Star
Member

since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

13 posted 2008-09-07 09:21 AM

Wow...I never expected this poem to get his many reviews! Thank you everyone for saying what you feel. It makes me extatic. Thanks so much everyone

~*Julianna*~

"You don't know me...but I know you. That's all that matters right now... Mr.Rainey!" - Secret Window

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