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Dark Poetry #4

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OLIAS
Senior Member

since 2000-06-20

Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa

0 posted 2008-07-09 02:11 PM

You press me, as a cheap chair
rammed against a peeling door,
If I could push back...
How brittle your response would be,
to shatter my illusions of self,
you, a weak dove tail,
and I am just the glue,
you long for hammer and nails
for confrontation with the wood,
and me, I long for joining.

OLIAS

Again
Junior Member

since 2008-05-13

Posts 47

1 posted 2008-07-10 03:44 AM

I really like what you have done here. I have a very clear image in my mind of what you are trying to portray. Nicely done =)

OLIAS
Senior Member

since 2000-06-20

Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa

2 posted 2008-07-10 11:01 AM

Thank you Again for your kind words

Regards
Olias

aZMERE bOHEMIAN nOMAD
Junior Member

since 2008-07-07

Posts 20
I live in the uk but dreaming of a place across the channel

3 posted 2008-07-19 05:40 PM

Damn your words are enough to make any woman come undone !

Im just captivated by the way you write..
your not just painting a picture that i see ... you weave words together with consumate ease and im just blown away as i jump between pips pages to read you

Every step we take,becomes a path well travelled

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