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angelfacegurl
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since 2008-04-17
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Swartz Creek, MI

0 posted 2008-07-05 01:23 PM


as i scream all alone
only because moms never home
shes out drinking her life away
is there anymore i need to say
im only a child meybe 2 or 3
bubbys the only one who cares for me
like i even know what caring is
i just say its what my bubby gives
hes the only one around for christmas he cooks me a meal
as i open my presant my emotions i begin to feel
as i pull out a photo of us smiling happy
in this photo i looked awful and crappy
but it was a great moment for me and him
when should this story end or begin
as moms comes without saying a word and ready for bed
i grab her a pillow to rest her head
she falls fast asleep
in my head its kind of a treat
so i dont have to hear her scream and yell
about how her lifes a living hell
and bubby walks in and holds me tight
lays me down and says goodnight
as i rest on the hard wet floor
and mt bodys all weak and sore
then i fall fast into a dream
saying thank you for bubby hes my king


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XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
1 posted 2008-07-05 01:48 PM


Ah, a double post. But this, I think, is the right one to respond to as it notifies you of a comment.

I can only repeat what I said in the other post, thank God for Bubby. You have made him my hero as well.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

BrittanyJ
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since 2007-06-03
Posts 461
Come find me?
2 posted 2008-07-05 06:14 PM


Aw...this is really sad, and yet so sweet in a way. Nicely written

If you love someone, let them go. If they come back, they were always yours. If they don't, they never were.

XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20
Posts 891
Neverland
3 posted 2008-07-05 08:13 PM


I really love this. Great write. And I did e-mail u back just incase u think i didn't....it might have ended up in your junk mail. Anyway, Great poem. (library)

   {~~*~~}

"You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans!...'cuase dat's just how I roll.."
{~Emily~}

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