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A Beautiful Disaster
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since 2007-01-13

Posts 409

0 posted 2008-06-28 05:28 AM

Sophie, a fragile gentle soul,
In Freedom saw the greatest virtue,
The spring of love, the dawn of all
Destined to be the end of torture.

For all it was not quite the same,
It was the person's inner power.
That till the end would pave their way
And fill with sense each minute an hour.

...Sophie was only seventeen,
But life had left her all alone.
She'd disallowed all her kin,
She had no one to call her own.

She had just one but faithful friend -
Her own reflection in the mirror.
All people failed to understand
Her open mind, so pure and clear.

She used to gain the strength inside
From melancholy, never-ending.
Her sorrow she could not hide,
She was so helpless at pretending.

She didn't want to be the one
Of monochrome and deadly crowd;
Her solitude just let her run
From those she knew nothing about.

It was the Freedom of her choice -
Sophie had nothing more to treasure...
Each time she heard a ghostly voice
It brought her pain that couldn't be measured.

Her memories aroused tears,
She knew the good would've never happened.
She knew her Only One was near...
But only in her heart, so shattered.

She'd promised Him she'd live through that
When seeing Him die. She couldn't follow.
She wished she'd been with Him, but dead.
Her life seemed then so dim and hollow.

She wanted so much to die,
But couldn't break the promise, faithful,
For death would've meant just having lied.
Her consciousness she had to face. It

Hurt Sophie so much to breathe,
The time did pass - her grief did grow.
And every day was like the last
In all her life, for she did know

That life, destined to bring just pain,
Was no sign of Freedom, inner.
She, listening to the falling rain,
Made up her mind... to be a sinner,

With no regrets to leave the world -
No one would cry a single tear.
"Forgive me, Love, - were her last words, -
Again we'll be together, dear."

She longed to be forever free,
Forever young, forever charming.
It was her own choice to be
For always loved, for always loving.

...Her body, lifeless and supine
Was found in the lake next morning.
No one felt sympathy or cried,
Still no one showed a sign of mourning.

Sophie, forever young, and He
From shards and ashes built a kingdom.
The life was going on, still dim,
But she had chosen endless Freedom.

midnightdreamer
Member

since 2008-02-03

Posts 309
Roy,ut

1 posted 2008-06-28 07:11 PM

sweet. sad. i loved it.
midnightdreamer

"It was heaven........right in the center of hell" Bella from New Moon

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

2 posted 2008-06-28 07:59 PM

Great story. Moving.

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`·

Abbeon
Member

since 2006-11-30

Posts 228
Curiousity, and wonder

3 posted 2008-06-28 11:02 PM

People walk through life as if it were a dream, not seeing the pain behind the mask, I wonder if some one had shown her kindness would it have saved her.

Thank you, that was, breathetaking

Rebecca.

The hollow emptiness, the crazed thoughts left to survive

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