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angelfacegurl Member
since 2008-04-17
Posts 67Swartz Creek, MI 
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why is life so sick hard times always seem to stick when i cant cry my heart out i cant let go and pout i will not show the real me why wont life just let me be but it will not fade away i hold it in everyday as i hope time goes fast i cannot forgive my past when my heart grows cold it just another page in my life to fold as deep inside i feel my pain theres nothing in this life for me to gain as depression takes over my thinking and so many things peoples been taking my soul, my heart, my dreams life is just like it seems inside i hide this emptiness in me theres so much darkness but meybe oneday i can break free and meybe oneday i can be me
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
Amazing. I know exacally how you feel. Library. {~~*~~} "You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans!...'cuase dat's just how I roll.." |
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Again Junior Member
since 2008-05-13
Posts 47 |
This is a really nice read. Its smooth, it rhymes, it has a nice flow to it and although its dark, it has hope in the end =). |
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midnightdreamer Member
since 2008-02-03
Posts 309Roy,ut |
i know this feeling. midnightdreamer "It was heaven........right in the center of hell" Bella from New Moon |
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Abbeon Member
since 2006-11-30
Posts 228Curiousity, and wonder |
First, I wish to thank you, You have written the truth of so many, Second i wish to tell you that, that was simply stunning, Thank you. Rebecca The hollow emptiness, the crazed thoughts left to survive |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
This was a well written and very sincere piece that grabs the heart. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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