»
Archives
»
Dark Poetry #4
»
That Place
| Dark Poetry #4 |
|
That Place |
|
|
Mad_Hatter Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393Canada |
Let’s catch up on old times Let’s have a fake conversation I’m wishing to be good enough Can you smell the salt? Doesn’t it makes this sting? Let’s “get over something for once” Let’s ignore all the little things I’m wishing to matter now Can you taste the blood? Does it makes this justified? I buried you on the beach Where the waves crash They beat this in With wicked waters And ghastly demands Washing away the sand That covers your face This is that place That wicked place… |
||
| © Copyright 2003 Ryan - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Defective Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 73Salisbury NC |
"That Place" isn't a very comfortable situation to be in but we all have been there before or will be there soon so just remember that you are not alone in "that place". Brilliant as always, your words can touch my soul. Kristi |
||
|
Mad_Hatter Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393Canada |
Thank you so much, I think I'm starting to be comfortable with this place and that's never good. |
||
|
KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
~Smiling~ PIP has a way of sucking you up and not letting you out  Enjoyed this one.  |
||
|
DarkAngel73554 Junior Member
since 2003-12-10
Posts 10somewhere in tha middle of nowhere |
~!nice piece~! |
||
|
Mad_Hatter Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393Canada |
Thank you guys, so much. |
||
|
Laney Member
since 2002-12-18
Posts 85Illinois |
another great piece...I'm beginning to think that PIP is more important than my therapist...lol well almost..j/k..excellent write. --Alana |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
