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Dark Poetry #4

Too Long Now

Again
Junior Member

since 2008-05-13

Posts 47

0 posted 2008-05-24 06:28 PM

If you dont need me
Then I dont need YOU
If you dont love me
Then I will stop loving you TOO
If you have moved on
See me heading toward that DOOR
Because its been too long now
And I cant get up off this FLOOR

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

1 posted 2008-05-24 08:43 PM

i like this, good job here!!

shakalakaboomboom
Junior Member

since 2008-05-19

Posts 44
V.A, U.S.A

2 posted 2008-05-25 10:39 PM

wow! thats a good break up poem lol

~Savana

Again
Junior Member

since 2008-05-13

Posts 47

3 posted 2008-05-26 01:30 AM

lol...thats exactly where it came from. The worse break up of my life.

shakalakaboomboom
Junior Member

since 2008-05-19

Posts 44
V.A, U.S.A

4 posted 2008-05-26 11:17 AM

oh my god! I am soo sorry :/

ladylisa
Member

since 2007-04-29

Posts 342
Florida USA

5 posted 2008-08-30 03:49 PM

Breakups are very hard, but once you take the first step, the second one gets easier and next thing you know you are running. Good luck, lis

Revon
Junior Member

since 2008-08-29

Posts 15

6 posted 2008-08-31 08:35 PM

I just got out of a relationship after begging her to forgive me i decided it wasnt worth it, it wasnt even my fault. This poem fits so well.

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