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Junior Member
since 2008-05-13
Posts 47


0 posted 2008-05-23 12:38 PM


I'm trying to get in touch with my darksides for therapy purposes and to stay healthy. Heres a darker one. ;/


Excuse me
For trying something new
Forigve me for saying something true
Let go of how I made you feel
God I am just so sick of you

I am starting to think that all your allegations
Are because I never loved you in the first place
Oh how I was not there for you
And oh how I turned my back on you
Sorry to break it to you
But you do know how to ruin something good
OR was it me that is to blame?
Sure blame me
Make yourself feel better
Say how I was not there for you
Write about how I was so untrue
Make yourself feel better
For God's sake...
Do what you have to do!

Excuse me
For trying something new
Forive me for saying something true
Let go of how I made you feel
God I am just so sick of you

I jumped the gun
And said I loved you
I never even KNEW you
I never even thought how cruel you could be
When I saw you
It was too late
I already made promises you did not forget
So tonight when you are alone
Dont come knocking on my door
Find someone new
To be UNtrue to ;/
Who said I wanted to be your PERFECT girlfiriend
Your pressure
I just cant take anymore
Find someone else to ruin
And leave me alone for once

Excuse me
For trying something new
Forgive me for saying something true
Let go of how I made you feel
God I am just so sick of you

So if this is really you
God forgive me for toying with you
But theres no way in hell
You and I will ever be
Find a shrink
Becuse I dont want to hear anymore from you
YOu just go on and on bout you
Crazy fool
I dont want you anymore
Stay away from me for sure
I just want to be normal
Before you ruined my life
God I swear tonight
All I need is knife
So I can cut myself
And forget you ever lived

Excuse me
For trying something new
Forigive me for saying something true
Let go of how I made you feel
God I am so sick of you


"Had the nerve to (beep) my whole life."
--The Veronicas


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voice2bheard
Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591
New York
1 posted 2008-06-09 10:58 AM


Loved it, its like your in it and reading it all in your head!!

Kate

midnightdreamer
Member
since 2008-02-03
Posts 309
Roy,ut
2 posted 2008-06-23 08:58 PM


amazing. that was a great poem.

midnightdreamer

"It was heaven........right in the center of hell" Bella from New Moon

XGarapanX
Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
3 posted 2008-07-29 01:02 PM


Well woven writing.

·´~`·­»Brett«­·´~`·

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