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Dark Poetry #4

Alaska's Labyrinth

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

0 posted 2008-05-20 09:01 PM

With this smile on my face
I lay to rest, remembering
my death as the very best.
I wont look back, just straight
& Fast. Out of this labyrinth,
Don't turn back.
No more suffering, no more tears.
Not one more regret of all these
years. I lost it all over the
past. Out of this labyrinth
Straight & Fast.

{~~*~~}

{&]ebbing.away.from*my.pain.}}
{~Emily~}

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2008-05-22 05:03 PM

Wow i love the emotion in this Emily. I love the title you use in this poem. Great work!

~Zach~

"Fate leads the willing, and drags along the reluctant."

shattered-smiles
Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 247
inside the shadows

2 posted 2008-05-22 10:16 PM

Very nice deario! I love it dearly, deary!

TJ

So cut me into pieces and tape me into something beautiful...

Again
Junior Member

since 2008-05-13

Posts 47

3 posted 2008-05-23 12:45 PM

I love this poem. I am glad you did not make it longer because for its message about "breaking free," its so perfect to keep it short and sweet and to the point. Really good. A+

Just.Another.Falling.Star
Member

since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

4 posted 2008-05-23 06:10 PM

Great poem Em, just as I said before. Alaska would have loved this if she were really here. But let's not cry again, just look forward, and not look at Lizzie's blue painted toe-nails. Library, by the way.

~*Julianna*~

"When life gives you lemons...alter their DNA and make SUPER LEMONS!!!"

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