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Dark Poetry #4

Here goes

masksrlife
Member

since 2008-03-26

Posts 109
Canada

0 posted 2008-05-18 01:55 PM

Walking closer
while im screaming
NO STAY AWAY
but you come closer into my heart
my hand falls off his and slips into you
life just cant be fair can it?
While we quickly turn away
he gives me that deadly glare
why this again?
As the dager hits my empty heart
I had enough
now I paid
the signiture of blood marked on my carpite floor
next to the two pictures
of the two that shared my heart
of the two who stole my heart
of the two who gave me the most pain
of the two who sliped there perfect hands into
my body and controled me
and changed me
and so now to relive you from me
and all the pain I give you all
here goes..... <3

*-crazycece-*

Just.Another.Falling.Star
Member

since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

1 posted 2008-05-18 02:28 PM

Very interesting write. I like it. Keep it up, library.

~*Julianna*~

"When life gives you lemons...alter their DNA and make SUPER LEMONS!!!"

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

2 posted 2008-05-24 05:04 AM

good poem!

shakalakaboomboom
Junior Member

since 2008-05-19

Posts 44
V.A, U.S.A

3 posted 2008-05-24 10:54 AM

OH MY GOD!
i love this poem!!!!!!!

~Savana

SilentSailor
Junior Member

since 2008-05-22

Posts 11

4 posted 2008-05-25 04:30 AM

Love it!!!

Keep it up. =)

BugBuggy
Member

since 2005-12-19

Posts 130
michigan

5 posted 2008-05-25 11:48 AM

very interesting read I found several different things in my own mind this could be about it was great

BugBuggy

lost-in-a-mind-of-dreams
Junior Member

since 2008-05-24

Posts 35

6 posted 2008-05-25 03:30 PM

nice

*****dreamer*****

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