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Just.Another.Falling.Star
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since 2008-05-08
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0 posted 2008-05-12 06:14 PM


Among The Living

I am the dead,
Waiting for day,
So I can walk the streets…
And pretend to live.

Each day while I walk
I see my family mourning in sadness.
But I think to myself
“Get over it, I have!”

I walk in the middle of the streets,
Letting cars “run me over”,
Sometimes I will cause accidents,
Making myself appear to the living.

But when I cause those horrible accidents,
I make new friends—while the others hate me.
And they walk with me day by day,
Until I’m ready to face Heavens gates.

~*Julianna*~

© Copyright 2008 Julianna - All Rights Reserved
eternally_singing
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since 2007-12-18
Posts 123
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1 posted 2008-05-12 07:52 PM


Interesting... I like this piece

At night a candle's brighter than the sun

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